Mirror, mirror..please don’t conceal
Tell me how does it feel,
When with a bright smile,
She looks at you and then,
Caresses her hair with a slight zeal.
Mirror,mirror.. I had a question in mind,
Whom do you more beautiful find?
The lady that gazes at you
With dream in her eyes
Or the angel that resides behind.
Mirror, mirror.. I always wonder this,
Don’t you ever her absence miss?
Because you are the only soul,
Who she so lovingly glares,
And make my heart burn in flares.
Mirror o mirror, I want you to say,
What will you take away
To let me be you for one day,
So that when she looks at me,
I get reflected deep into her eyes.
About Me
- Gautam Anand
- After being chased away from my engineering..(why ??? check out NIT teachers).. I landed up into SCMHRD.. for studying.. errrr.. someone only yesterday pointed out MBA.. which I have yet to figure out. By the way I am planning to flee this too.. before teachers chase me away again.. In b/w this blog is dedicated to all those teach..errs .. ; so that they can learn sth abt love for humanity ! Okk.. u found all this to be crap.. may be this will help " I like writing poetry"
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26 comments:
The concept itself is innovative and so sweet .. that my heart goes out for this poem ..
good work dude..!!
nice concept and the treatment was also good. Why this long gap ?
@mohit..
thx , I thoguht if the gap has been so long .. it should count..
@Som
Actually I was very busy last month..nevertheless,, I am happy that long gap .. meant I should try sth different..
Hey that's a really sweet poem.. Probably the best of all ur compositions! Sooo once again, this not-in-love man comes up with beautiful depictions of it! :) This is awesome work Gautam.. keep it up!
Nice work! Very Awww-ish :-)
@Guneet
thx for showering loads of praises..i have yet to figure out whether its my best..
@Komal
.. thx.. I always wish that I create sth aww..wish :)
very novel.. and extremely likeable..
So that when she looks at me,
I get reflected deep into her eyes.
What a desire...!!
Nice one!
@Rahul
yup .. I tried to novel..
@Sophie
It's only an illusionary desire :)
hey its a nice poem..the allusions are very good :)
was updating mine yesterday..so did not go through urs :)
I liked the mirror concept a lot !!
this took my beats away :)
yup yup!
you actually have a nice way with words.
seems the whole deal is fun :)
@Sudha
thx .. and yes thats what many ppl r telling me
@Seher
ya I njoy playing wih words..
but hw did this take your beats away ..? :)
The second line of each paragraph (or whatever u call it ) leaves a great effect on the reader .....over all a great creation.GOOD WORK !!!
thx Ashu..
As I told.. earlier .. in all those lines I tried playing with words..
I met a poet after a long time .. its had to find one at times.. amazing .. truly amazing !
NIce one Gautam..
new to your blog..
liked the poem..
wishes..
@Nameless , Man in Painting
Thx..for your heartening comments..
thats quite thoughtful.I never looked into the mirror with such a deep thought abt somebdy.And nw I realize wat was behind your silence most f the time in coll.You are really brilliant and i can imagine the happiness you get while writing these.go on dear....Al da best.
Ashish
Thx Ashish..
but let me tell u thr was nothing behind my silence.. :)
I'll admit a very mercenary intention drew me to this poem of urs. that being? i had written a poem of the exact same title when i had a fixation for mirrors for sometime .lol.
returning to the poem..
"Mirror, mirror.. I always wonder this,
Don’t you ever her absence miss?
Because you are the only soul,
Who she so lovingly glares,
And make my heart burn in flares."
these lines are so cutely jealous!!
as someone said...very 'awwish'. ha ha. i beg to affirm that opinion!
i don't often find men writing such cute things, so its a refreshing change ..
Cheers to cuteness ^__^
@Poetess
Thx for being cute ..
and ya.. if you can read b/w the lines u wud find that cuteness in most of my poems.. whther it be cute jealousy or cute desire or cute likeness :))
I like the concept behind this one. A strong message delivered here. And, I like the style you have used to convey it as well. Good job!!! Keep writing!!! I am following you henceforth.
@bros
thx.. for appreciating and following.. I hope .. u will also like my future work..
nice
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