My dear lady,
I know you have something to tell,
What is it that you‘re hiding in the shell?
The lips that once used to smile,
Are now bestowed for mystery and guile.
Those lovely two rosy creations of God
Are not to veil the truths even or odd.
But it’s for those dying souls,
Whose last wish is to see the most beautiful smile.
My dear lady,
Whenever I pass by your side,
You look at me with puzzled eyes,
The distance between your lips increase,
But then again your eagerness cease.
I wish, I knew where are those keys?
That can unlock all your miseries.
My dear lady,
The only thing I wish to convey.
The tale which you want to say,
Or the guilt that you want to confess,
Is nothing but an illusionary offense
Because till those lips brightens your face,
All the wrongs and sins that you place,
I am ready to bear it with a smiling embrace.
Wednesday, January 28, 2009
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19 comments:
wow..
very different and very likable..
but it has the stamp of gautam on it..
liked the way u weaved a story around the poem..
haan......mast hai bhai.........
tum hero banta ja raha hai din ba din.........
Nice one..!!
Smile, it is the key that fits the lock of everybody's heart. Few ppl r exception though. :)
@Mohit
thx.. I hope .. I will continue being different..
@Prateek..
hero.. ka to pata nahi.. ek poet to pehle ban jaon..
@Sophie..
thx..
Ya smile is.. the key.. but then smtimes smile is not the only key :)
Ye sometimes it takes much more thn tht!
Keep going Gautam!
You have the perfect gift for her once you both get going together :) !
awesome description of someone's lips... and equally nice expression of feelings..
Gautam.. U rock man...
keep it up....
@Sudha
did u really mean that ?? ..
anyways thx..
@manish..
finally u had sth to say...thx
To write sth like this u hv to feel ..
so r u feeling ..?
wah wah !
very different and ver likeable as Mohit has put it.
would love to read more!
@seher
thx.. hope u read .. all my creations..
@Rahul...
naah :)
Nice poem; but yaar do you always have to remain in the so called structure of rhymes.. as at times it causes you to put in words you could do without.
Even I have this problem and would like to see poets coming out of it..
Very nice :-)
thx .. Komal , Som
@Som..
See the last line of 1st stanza..
I go more by theme of poem..
nice :)
goodness...chancing upon your blog i find a khazana of sweet poems !! this one included
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