I met an angel that day;
She looked so cheerful and gay,
I had this impending thought,
From where has this destiny brought
A lady so charming and alone,
And why my heart’s beating not stopped.
Thinking and mumbling what next to do,
Gathering courage I moved a bit,
The time around me seemed so slow,
Also the weather so cold and frigid.
Seeing me she turned red for a while,
Then she greeted me with a smile.
I asked her “Will you be mine”?
“Dare you not even think for a while?”
“That I can ever be yours “she riled.
“For you are a simple being and I divine”.
With tears in my eyes, I realized,
The moment that I had eulogized,
Was nothing more than a dream,
For angels are not for mortals on earth;
They are either for the souls in heaven
Or ….... men in dream.
Saturday, December 20, 2008
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AB IS POEM KI TAARIF MEIN HUM KYA KAHEN..WAH KYA POEM HAI LAAJAWAB...WAH SUBHANALLAH.....WAH WAH WAH...AISI POEM TO SHAKESPEARE BHI NAHI LIKH SAKTA..KYA POEM HAI..WAH WAH..SUBHANALLAH.....SURFERS ZARA GAUR FARMAIIN.....
Interesting and definitely different from your usual line and structure of poetry;
The message conveyed is voice of most of the guys in the world but you could have handled the language better .. unless you have deliberately tried to twist it...
@ Som..
Ya.. I purposefully tried to be different this time.. not only in my theme .. but also in my structure and language..
moving..
Really wonderful.
A nice poem.. with a nice message
So. what to write about this creation of urs..
a poet who's getting finer with each passing day...
Its really amazing, awesome....
Hopin u get ur angel wid eyes so deep and dat lovely two streaks
n smile so sweet.. I knw u miss her very much but she is a reality and not haze...
just wait for THAT DAY...
greatly written manish.. why don't you turn a poet...
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