Thursday, October 9, 2008

The Reason of Your Smile So Sweet...

The smile on your face, that charming glow
With hairs spread like clouds over snow,
And all draped in the whitest white
You looked nothing less than a dove in flow.

Seeing you, my heart skipped a beat,
For I had never seen you so pleased.
The only thing I wish to know,
What’s the reason of your smile so sweet?

Your smile is like a budding rose,
Like the first light of sun on meadows,
Like the joyful sight of singing sparrows,
And like the first drop of rain after scorching heat.

The fields are green and full of life,
The birds chirping in their mightiest vibe,
And the roses blushing like a new bride
Are all these the reasons of your smile?

Or is it something because of me?
That you want it to remain a mystery,
Whatever it be - the cause of your glee -
It makes my soul joyful and the mind go free.

5 comments:

ashu said...

Hi Mr. Poet..
hmmm...though i dont have much knowledge abt poems,i couldnt stop myself listening the tune of art behind your thought driven romantic crap which surprised me by chance..Its da start b8 i wish u al da best..keep writing and posting...coz those who dont do things for name and glory but interest does get that someday...
cheerss..!!!

Ashish

sunny said...

You have written very nicely but not enoough to beat me becz what i have written for someone is awesome....Bt i have not posted on Blogs...becz i dont know....

Manish said...

Itna dard... itni kashish...
aisa to koi us waqt hi likh sakta hai whn he is in luv... and she wud be too unlucky if she dont fall for it...
btw... I didnt knew bout ur dis side of character.. a poet... really it seems by a chance...
but its really awesome...
keep it up..

Som said...

moving... the poems are really nice.. some of them had shades of Neruda..

Gautam said...

@som
I have never come across any of Neruda's poem but I will definitely like to see his creation..
@ashu,sunny,manish,som
thx for appreciation..